진달래 꽃 AI 번역 비교

김소월의 "진달래 꽃"을 AI 로 영어로 번역하고 내가 2023년에 번역한 것과 비교해 봤다.

 

나보기가 역겨워 가실 때에는

말없이 고이 보내 드리우리다.

 

영변에 약산 진달래꽃

아름 따다 가실 길에 뿌리오리다.

 

가시는 걸음걸음 놓인 그 꽃을

사뿐히 즈려 밟고 가시옵소서.

 

나보기가 역겨워 가실 때에는

죽어도 아니 눈물 흘리우리다.

 

ChatGPT

When you grow weary of seeing me
And turn to leave,
I shall let you go, softly, without a word.

 

On Yak Mountain in Yongbyeon,
Azaleas bloom —
I’ll gather armfuls, and strew them along your path.

 

Step by step as you walk away,
Tread gently on those flowers
Scattering them underfoot as you go.

 

When you grow weary of seeing me
And turn to leave,
Even in death, I shall not shed a tear.

 

MS CoPilot

When you leave me, weary of my love,  
I’ll gently let you go.  
And as you walk away,  
I’ll scatter armfuls of azaleas  
on the mountain paths you take.

Softly, step by step,  
As you tread the petals,  
Do not forget—  
Each one was placed in love.

Even if you forget me,  
I shall not shed a tear.

 

Google Gemini

When you tire of my sight and turn to leave,
I'll quietly, gently send you on your way.
From Yaksan, Youngbyun, azaleas I'll gather,
A carpet of bloom upon your path, I'll lay.

Tread softly on those flowers, so petal-strewn,
Tread gently as you go, and never look behind.
Though I should die, though I should weep in pain,
I'll shed no tear, nor mourn, nor ever pine.

 

김영원 (2023년 3월 AI를 알기 전에 번역해 본 것)

When I no longer please you and you wish to leave me,

I won’t say a word but will let you go as you wish.

 

 Azalea blossoms from Yongbyon’s Medicine Mountain,

I will get armfuls and spread on your way.

 

Tread gently on those flowers

Placed step after step when you leave.

 

When I no longer please you and you wish to leave me,

I won’t shed any tears

 

단순 번역 tool 들의 2년 전과 현재의 첫 귀절 번역

	2023년 8월	2025년 7월
translator.eu	When you are disgusted with the sight of me, I will send you away without a word.	When you are disgusted with me, I will send you away without a word.
translate. google.com	When you leave because you are sick of seeing me, I will silently send you away.	When you leave because you find me disgusting, I will send you off quietly.
papago. naver.com	If you find me disgusting, I'll let you go without saying a word.	I'll let you go without saying anything when you're sick of me looking at you.
deepl.com	When you're disgusted with the sight of me, I'll let you go without a word.	When you're disgusted with the sight of me, I'll let you go without a word.
Symphony (Systran)	When I’m sick, I’ll send you away without a word.	If you feel disgusted to see me,  I will send you without saying anything